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  3. Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    Its my first site. I'll make it as my personal n blog site.
    Haven't finished yet though, but its viewable.:blink2:
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    http://alvinbilian.freehostia.com
    You can also give me some testimonial there.
    I'm new at PHP so the testimonial section may look bad..:wacko:
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  6. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    Quote Mozilla Firefox originally posted:
    The connection has timed out

    The server at alvinbilian.freehostia.com is taking too long to respond.
    Are you sure your site is working? :push:
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  9. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    AArrgghh... **** it... the server is down.... its still working 2 hours ago.... ****....
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  12. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    Wow.

    I really didn't expect those brilliant graphics...

    I have no idea what happened at first ("Loading data"), no doubt Javascript, but when it loaded it looked unique.

    I would advise centering the body container (because not everybody is on 1024x768), repeating an image to fill the white (or black :p) space on the background and, although it tells the user about using Firefox, I would remove the "Best view in Firefox with 1024x768 screen resolution" comment ;)

    I also like how you avoided Flash for your animations and used Javascript (with opacity timers?) :)

    Overall, nice job; I'll definitely be visiting again (too overwhelming to see once :p)

    EDIT: would be nice if the site was accessible without Javascript and maybe take away the "Enter" button and just fade it in when the page loads.
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  15. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    Looks nice :). Though is it just me or are the edges not very crisp? They look a bit blurry on my monitor.
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  18. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    the edges look "warped"...

    Whats with the "enter" page?

    You've got not-found errors!

    Make the view port expand, ditch the scrollbars!

    Quote Calamitie originally posted:
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    Noodles is a lossy teleportation framework for Noodle objects
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  21. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    hehehe...
    thanx all for your comments:idea:

    I've been working for this site for about 3 weeks, all alone.
    And I tried to make it looks simple and "3d".. hehe :-)
    I've tried to make this site, a cross-browser site, although, I prefer using Firefox.
    Yeah, the corners is a little bit blurry, I'll fix it soon.^_^


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  24. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    Quote alvin_bilian originally posted: View Post
    Yeah, the corners is a little bit blurry, I'll fix it soon.^_^
    They look a bit vertically stretched too, which might be the cause of the 'blurriness' ;)
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  27. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    aye aye...
    Fixing on the go... ^_^
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  30. Re: Please review my site --> alvinbilian.freehostia.com

    It's about as accessible as a web-site made out of fish, but at least it's unique as Clamitie so delicately puts it.

    Mike
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